‘Rock in
Rio’ Lisbon 2012
Day: 3rd
June 2012 – I and my mother, may father, my brother and some friend went to ‘Rock
in Rio’, Lisbon.
Before
going had not the notion of what a music festival was but I was very happy to
be then.
When we
arrived there were about 80 000 people, but the place was enormous, so it didn’t
look live there were so many people then.
The music
festival was very good. There were a lot of stages, where shows took place at
all times.
The shows
were many and all different , but most were music shows, of course. There were
also some dancing shows.
I loved
going to the ‘Rock in Rio’ Lisbon 2012.
Sofia
Farrica

not may, but my; not friend, but friends; you lack I after going; not then, but there; not the in the last sentence. Your text is ok.
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