‘Rock in
Rio’ is a music festival which began in Brazil.
The first time it happened was in 1985, in Rio de Janeiro.
But in 2004, id had its first edition in Lisbon.
It has already taken place in ten editions.
‘Rock in Rio’, went the other places like Brazil, Portugal, Spain, Peru and Argentina.
It takes lace every 4 years.
Music festivals are usually on a place when we can meet new people, be happy, dance and sing with lots of music. There are often singers that we admire and like very much.
Many people go to ‘Rock in Rio’, in many places: they go to Rio de Janeiro, Madrid and Lisbon, for example.
I would like to go and have this experience.
The first time it happened was in 1985, in Rio de Janeiro.
But in 2004, id had its first edition in Lisbon.
It has already taken place in ten editions.
‘Rock in Rio’, went the other places like Brazil, Portugal, Spain, Peru and Argentina.
It takes lace every 4 years.
Music festivals are usually on a place when we can meet new people, be happy, dance and sing with lots of music. There are often singers that we admire and like very much.
Many people go to ‘Rock in Rio’, in many places: they go to Rio de Janeiro, Madrid and Lisbon, for example.
I would like to go and have this experience.
Mónica

Not id, but it; not went, but takes place in other places; not lace, but place; not when, but where. Your text is ok.
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